Why strings are tied when we have feet,we work hard but humans get the treat.
Our puppeteers make us do a silly action,
and we get credit less than a fraction.
We are kept in a box made of wood,
we would have broken our strings if we could.
People say"ha ha!! see that puppet is so funny."
and we bring the puppeteer's hard earned money.
"why tied..." is on our lips
and we don't know why we dance on puppeteer's finger tips.
Break these strings and set us free,
and we'll pray that you always glee!!!
Dear Shubh excellent effort. Lot of depth .... philosophical. Keep it up
ReplyDeletethank's a lot uncle.
DeleteWell done my darling ...keep writing!
ReplyDeletethank's mom you are my inspiration, my motivation and my success. all these comments and good wishes are all because of you.
DeleteVery good Shubh. Excellent. Keep writing. Stay blessed my dear.
ReplyDeletethank you nani.
DeleteExcellent what deep thoughts at such a tender age ! You will beat Wordsworth and Shelly hollow .keep it up!
ReplyDeleteVery good effort, keep it up !
ReplyDeletethanks a lot papa.
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ReplyDeleteShubh my boy....You continue to amaze me...so so proud of you.A blog at this tender age....Go son go....Your goodness is reflected in your creative flow.Be blessed always.Lots of love and hugs
ReplyDeleteVery deep meaning ! Somewhere evryone can connect to it !! Keep going Shubhii����������������������
ReplyDeletethanks for your comments.
Deletethank you everyone for your motivational and inspiring comments!!!
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